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Saturday, May 29, 2010

Social networking

On a day of their first vacation

little twin sisters died for some Maoists assassination

facebook says-movie is good ,go and watch

needs your appreciation,

A mother is standing on the railway track,

looking to her dead child in last admiration,

twitter says- going to Paris

enjoyment is a justification.

I am no rebel,and not doing complain and blame

and neither in self apprehension

i know life moves on,but on the day if we do not utilize

the social network to give support and inspiration

then in my point socializing via facebook and twitter is of no utilization,

If you compare between them and us you'll always find

a very thin line of differentiation.

2 comments:

  1. Well said. Its quite valid. Today, social networks have become a tool for self appreciation and ego satisfaction!!! I am one of its victim. How unfortunate.
    Just a couple of mistakes that may be rectified.
    1. ---"tion" mania persists. Please come out of it.
    2.Twins must have died 'in' and not 'for' the assassination.
    3. The mother must have been looking 'at' and not 'to'.
    Hope u didn't mind!
    Overall, the meaning is clear. Point taken friend!!! Its a wonderful fact which possibly is not the right, but we all do it.

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  2. Surely will rectify from the next one...

    just tried to take some bit of poetic liberty....

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